Wednesday, March 21, 2012

線上寫作討論Beta版:各組組長張貼處




萬萬沒想到,平均每人要花26分鐘,比想像中的還多15分鐘,怎辦?

不管,反正,先測試完各組組長,再慢慢修正檢討方式。

請各組組長,把討論過後的定版,張貼此處,也請組員前後對照,看看差異處,並且比照類似方式修改(如果恰有雷同的構句)。

3 comments:

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    by Dickson

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  2. Snoopy

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    By Grace

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    By Jeff

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