Polar Bear The polar bear is a bear native largely within the (Arctic). It's the world's largest land carnivore and also the largest bear.
Polar bears range throughout the circumpolar north in areas where they can hunt seals at open limbs. They are white, long neck and small head. They are good at swimming. Seals are the polar bears primary prey, particularly the ringed seal and, sometimes, the bearded seal. When hunting is good, polar bears will typically eat only the fat and leave the rest of the bodies for scavengers including arctic foxes and younger bears. In the wild, polar bears live an average of 15 to 18 years.
Polar bears are a potentially threatened species rather than an endangered animals. The major threat to the polar bear is climate change. Other threats include pollution etc. When ice become melt because of global warming. Polar bears will have no place to live. But we still can see them in zoo!
What is the keenest sense of smell on land? You must think (it) is the dog. Indeed, it is. There are more than 400 breeds of (dogs) in the world, such as Dachshund, Labra doodle, Pembroke Welsh Corgis, Cavalier King Charles Spaniels and German Shepherd Dogs. In these breeds of (dogs) , ( I most interested in Dachshund.)
Dachshund come in short haired smooth, long haired smooth and wire haired. They also have a wide (variety colors) . The (most) common (colors) are ( red , black and tan.) Dachshunds are playful, faithful and affectionate.
Dachshund was used to breed to track, dig (for their) prey, bury it, and (bark) to alert the (hunter) where (they) and (their) prey are located. (Dachshund) is a (scented) hunter and when ( they pick up the scent , they are ) single minded. When (they go) to (the) ground, (they are) formidable (enemies).
Penguin (One of) the most popular animals in Antarctica are penguins. Actually, there are seventeen kinds of penguins in the world. They have thick fat so as to store energy. In addition, they can move fast in the sea just as birds are flying in the sky. They are good at swimming and it is a great talent for them to run away from the (attack of enemies).
These different kinds of penguins can live in the same area (peacefully) because they eat dissimilar seafood. Moreover, they have good eyesight and listening to find out their mates or kids even in a great plenty of penguins.
Recently, (certain kinds of them) are in danger of (extinction). For instance, some dogs, cats, foxes and stoats which brought by people may attack penguins (, and the direct reason for their extinction is pollution of the sea and the changing of weather and these are caused by humans.) To sum up, people cannot turn a blind eye to the serious (threat to them).
Hippo The hippo is the mostly(most) herbivorous mammal in sub-Saharan Africa.They are above(weight about) two thousand kilograms,long three to four meters,(they) are the thid big animal on the land.Their skin has thick sebaceous level,the common goods(object) can't harm them.
The hippo's head is big,mouth is extravagant,and ear(a) is(are) small.They are the social animal,each crowd probably has foury ty(there are about fourty hippos in each croed.).Their life-span is about fourty to fifty.
Hippopotamuses are completely opposite what with the outlook.Their temperament is extremely fierce,and easily attack other animals.In the world,one of the most dangerous biological animal(Hippo is one of the most dangerous biological animal in the world.).It does not have the natural enemy nearly, often is killed including the alligator and the lion by it(it is iften killed by the allgators and lons).The only natural enemy is a(the) humanity. When the(去掉) hippopotamus opening(opened its) mouth, is(it) is(去掉) actually threatening(threatens) the enemy.
Hippo The hippo is the mostly(most) herbivorous mammal in sub-Saharan Africa.They are above(weight about) two thousand kilograms,long three to four meters,(they) are the thid(thrid) big animal on the land.Their skin has thick sebaceous level,the common goods(object) can't harm them.
The hippo's head is big,mouth is extravagant,and ear(s) is(are) small.They are the social animal,each crowd probably has foury ty(there are about fourty hippos in each croed.).Their life-span is about fourty to fifty.
Hippopotamuses are completely opposite what with the outlook(appearance).Their temperament is extremely fierce,and easily attack other animals.In the world,one of the most dangerous biological animal(Hippo is one of the most dangerous biological animal in the world.).It does not have the natural enemy nearly, often is killed including the alligator and the lion by it(it is iften killed by the allgators and lons).The only natural enemy is a(the) humanity. When the(去掉) hippopotamus opening(opened its) mouth, is(it) is(去掉) actually threatening(threatens) the enemy.
Cell Phone The use of cell phone are becoming more common than ever, some people even have more than one cell phone. When I got my first cell phone, I was a junior high student; however, ( some children in elementary school are already have cell phones, and are very fashion ones. ) Today, we are going to talk about the most fashion kind: smart phone.
There are so many kinds of smart phone, and they all have lots of special applications of their own. Besides the functions like making calls, sending messages and taking pictures, smart phones enable you to surf the Internet, keep in touch with friends through some social websites, check your e-mail and can also edit your photos or music. One of the most interesting applications I have ever ( seen ) is an application that it can take down a girl's menstrual cycle, and will remind them before the next one come.
A smart phone combine so many interesting and useful functions in one phone ( making ) people become smarter, and that is the reason I think it deserve the name " smart ".
Snake’s doesn’t have clear hearing and sight. They can’t hear clearly and also can’t see very lightly. So they usually use its nose to smell the quarries and can note where the environment they are. Snakes different from other animal are that they don’t have any foot, they can’t walk by their feet. Then snakes walk by their venter, and walk with “S” shape. This is snakes unique feature that no animals the same as them. Snakes always made people scared, but actually they also are afraid of people. Take snakes can’t walk for example. Snakes just can crawl on the road, and their vision and auditory sense are not good at all, so we should not afraid of the snakes.
Computer is common in a family(for people). But in(In) fact, notebook is more convenient than a(the) computer. It is easy to carry and it( )is( ) smaller than the computer. Notebook is just() like a small computer. There are(has) many functions, but most of them are the(just) same as the computer. However, it also has many shortcomings. For example, notebook is easy to get troubles(damages) and it can’t stay for(without power) more than five hours in average. Students always choose computer not the notebook.(delete the stence) To sum up, both of them have good points or bad points. Just depends on everyone’s need.
Coffee is the most popular drink in Taiwan. If you look around the city where you live, you can find many places where sell different (kinds) of coffee in convenience stores. Especially, they offer it (in) low (price). But Why do people need coffee in their daily life? People are usually taking great responsibility for family and doing heavy job for company everyday. They need caffeine to get more energy and stay awake while they are working in the office.
Also, drinking coffee is a good way to release pressure. For instance, the most of western companies allow employees to have time taking a break and drinking coffee in the coffee time in the afternoon at 3:00pm. For young people, coffee is a meaning of fashion. They like to drink coffee with friends or getting on line in the coffee shop,like starbucks. All and all, coffee becomes one of the important drinks in Taiwan.
So,ladies and gentlemen,do you drink coffee everyday?
What do you think about cats? You probably think of them as sneaks and even little devils (because there are many black sayings about cats in old-fashioned tales.) They have triangle-liked ears, a pair of special eyes that would (change) with the light in the day and night (and) a long tail. We often have a wrong impression on something because (we do not know it enough), like our images of cats. Actually, cats have some very cute characteristics. Cats are very quiet and tender (animals). Instead of making a lot of noises, they will just silently (be your company). Sometimes, they will need some of your attention, and they will act like a child. If you spend (much) time with cats, you will find out that they are not evil, but in fact, quite (cute). You will find many surprises when you get along with them. And, maybe, they will be one of your best friends.
Embarrassing Experience Everyone has an embarrassing experience. It is difficult to react when people (encounter) an embarrassing situation. For example, fall down the stairs in public (and) bump against a clean glass window or (door.) There are many embarrassing events happen day to day.
As I see it, the most embarrassing experience I have ever had is to (fart) in the tiny space, which often happens in (a) elevator. This physical phenomenon is difficult to control. The (situation is often called) "elephant in the room". Everyone knows that what is going on, but no one will (say anything in) such an awkward occasion.
(Next time, when) you (encounter) embarrassing things, maybe you should cover your face with mask to avoid people recognizing you!
With big, little long, black ears on head, he has become the most famous beagle (in our life.) Snoopy has become a world-wild known name in the recent fifty years. Snoopy is a (major character) which was created by American cartoonist, Charles M. Schulz, in a series (comic), Peanuts.
Snoopy loves to play tricks on his master, Charlie Brown. He (enjoys) immersing in his own fantasy. He always images himself in every role such as a World War II soldier, a pilot or a navy. Although sometimes he seems a little unreasonable, he has a lovely aspect. He likes to play with rabbits and his (best) friend, a small, homeless hummingbird.
Snoopy not only makes people laugh but also gives us deep inspirations. Indeed, he has been an important part (in the memories of many people's childhood). And this cunning, impish dog (will last long forever.)
Cat Cats are one of the smartest (刪去of all) animals. They have been survived for thousand(刪去s) (刪去for) years. All the cat family are born to be (hunted). They are good enough to think how to catch their great feast. It is no wonder that(why) people think cats are smart. Cars are very individual. They can take care of themselves without human beings feeding them. Besides, they have a lot of pride. Sometimes, people thought cats are too proud to obedient. Cats have so many features that always charm people. It is a great choice to choose cats as pet.
(First,)Mt. Jade is the highest mountain in East Asia.Mt.Jade(刪去Mt.Jade改Otherwise,it) is at an elevation of about 3,952 meters. Many climbers are regarded Mt. Jade(刪去Mt.Jade改it) as a goal.
(Second,)Mt. Jade is characterized by its biological diversity. Mt. Jade(刪去Mt.Jade改its) country park is located on it.
(加At the last,)Mt. Jade not only is a holy mountain of Bu Nun Tribe and Zou Tribe but also symbolizes (in) Taiwan.
There are so many books in the whole world. The diversity of books is really amazing. You can learn (from) it, be entertained by it and you can even write on it. Now (let us) know ( )notebook(s) better.
If you take a few minutes (in) a bookstore, you will be surprised how (various) the notebooks are. From the (book)size, content to the cover, you can always find the right one that you really need. For example, if you are a writer, and you need to right down your sudden inspiration, you can use the pocketbook. Or if you are an artist, you can use a plain one.
All in all, notebook(s) ( ) always provide you a place where you can “talk”. A notebook will be a good company and (bear) everything for you (or "you can bear everything with it"). You can take it as a tutor. And most important, you can take it as a friend.
1. The African Meercat The word meercat comes from Dutch, and it means "lake cat". However, meercats aren't cats, and most of meercats do not live near the river. A full grew meercat is usually around 30 centimeters long, and weighs around 725 grams. They run around with their legs, and their tails point up at the sky. When they stand still, they look like humans who look over tall grass.
Although meercats are small, they have strong claws to help them dig out their underground homes. They also use their claws to find tasty insects in the dirt. No matter what they are doing, one or two meercats always go to higher place where they can prevent danger. The brave animals even give their own lives to protect each other.
Meercats show that even the smallest and weakest of creatures can survive in the African grassland.
Taylor Swift She is born in American pennsylvania.She has long curly blond hair,(and) blue eyes.Her height is 180 cm.Her birthday is on December, 13.She is twenty-two years old this year. Taylor Swift is good at singing,(and) playing guitar.She can write many songs and compose a poem.She began to write song(s) when she was 12.Because of her unusual, she was bullied by other chilidren.(But she didn't give in, this frustration made her(devote) to create. Now her (songs are) popular around the world.For example, Love Story is one of her most popular song.She has a speical habit before performance. She will write "thirteen" on her arm, because this number means lucky to her. Taylor Swift won many prizes in her present life.She had a tour performance last year, she toured many countries, and successfully became a (well-known) person.Today, she is not only a country singer,but also a superstar in the world.
The Giant Panda is a bear native to 〈the〉 South Western 〈of〉 China. It is easily recognized by its large 〈and〉 distinctive black patches around the eyes〈,〉 the ears 〈,〉 and 〈the〉 body. The Giant Panda's main food is bamboo. Therefore, they need to live in a place where 〈there is full of〉bamboo.
In the wild, the Giant Panda is a terrestrial animal and spends its life roaming and 〈living〉in the bamboo forests. The Giant Panda eats as much as 14 〈kilograms〉of bamboo shoots〈 in an average day〉. Because the Giant Panda consumes a diet in 〈low〉nutrition, it is important for it to keep its digestive tract full. The Giant Panda is able to climb and 〈live〉in hollow trees or rock crevices〈,〉but〈 they〉 do not 〈take them as〉permanent dens.
〈The〉 Giant Panda is very important 〈for〉us and our country. 〈What makes matter worse is that〉many people hunt them for different 〈purposes〉, such as selling them for money. It becomes 〈one of the〉 endangered species. I wish everyone 〈could〉 protest them and conserve their〈habitats〉.
Pig What is the fattest animal in the world? (That'a right!) The answer is a pig. To tell the truth, pigs do love to be clean. However, (most) people want to decrease the cost, they let those pigs live in a lot of mud and do not want to use water to wash them. Therefore, it is a stereotype that pigs like to be dirty. Pigs have special noses, it is a feature of them. Also, it is a specific symbol of them. Their both nose holes are so big, they make pigs look so ridiculous. They have four huge and short legs. We may think that they can not run so fast; nevertheless, they run very quickly. On the other hand, they have a cute and curly tale. Pigs are not only an animal but also a kind of food. A lot of people like to eat pork, which is a dish of cooked pig. Most of all, they can be our pets or our food. Next time, while you looking at a crowd of pigs , don't feel them disgusting or dirty. They are the fattest even the smart creature in the world.
(When) talking about small animals, what will catch your (eyes)? Ants, mice, worm, etc. The answer is flea. Flea is the smallest visible animal in this world.
They used to live in other creatures(') hair and staying alive by sucking the blood out of their host. Another special feature about this little fellow (去逗號) is that it can jump almost one hundreds time higher then it`s original size! Is (that not) incredible!
Fleas can be found on almost every wild animals with fur,[去括號] and (it) is almost impossible to extinct.These small vampires is (sure to be) a miracle of the nature.
Cat Cats are one of the smartest of all animals. They have been survived (for thousand years). All the cat family are born to be hunters. They are (good to) think how to (prepare) their great feast. It is no wonder that people think cats are smart. Cars are very individual. They can take care of themselves without human beings feeding them. Besides, they (are) pride. Sometimes, people thought cats are too proud to obedient. Cats have so many features that always charm people. It is a great choice to choose cats as pet.
The Fainting Goat With a(the) worldwide population of(去of) over 450 million, goats are the earliest-known domesticated animals. However there is one breed like no other(another)－the Tennessee Fainting Goat(s). (They are)Also known as Stiff-leg, Wooden-leg, Nervous or Scare Goats. Fainting goats are quite special because they look as if they have(were) really fainted after being startled. Fainting goats have an inherited condition called congenital myotonia, which causes their muscles to lock up. When they are excited or scared, some (will) freeze up and collapse on the other side, while others brace(bracing) themselves on rigid legs. And their large, prominent eyes are another noticeable characteristic. The name is actually a misnomer because the goats never lose consciousness when they fall over. The condition lasts for 10 to 15 seconds, after which(that) the goats will get up and run in a stiff-legged fashion.
Menghuan Pond is located in Yangmingshan National Park at about 850 meter height.()Because of its height,()this pond (was)is covered by (the) fog almost (every year)throughout the whole year(,).(p)People call(ed) it Menghuan Lake,which means(ed) fantastic and hazy. ( )It also has another name,()Duck Pond,()because there are many ducks (swam)swimming (on)in this pond.()In this pond,()(lived)lives very previous plants, ()such as Isoetes (Taiwanese)Taiwanesis.()It is (a) one kind of the disappearing plants(,).()(so) (w)We have to protect (this)these plants to avoid them becoming (extact)extinct. ( )In (R)recent years,()the (weather were)global climate is getting worse.()If we keep (hurting)spoiling the earth,()maybe this good place and special plants will be gone in the near future.()As a result,()we have to treasure this earth.()(Maybe)Hope that our children and grandchildren can also admire this earth in the future(.),too. originally by Bonnie, modified by Candace
What (kind of) animal is the most popular in China?The answer is giant panda.The giant panda has a black-and-white coat and a body shape (which is) typical of bears.It has black fur on its ears, eye patches, muzzle, legs, arms and shoulders.
The average (of) giant panda eats as much as 9 to 14 kg (20 to 30 pounds) of bamboo shoots a day.They live in forest and the cool place.
In Taiwan, the popular name for panda is the inverted 貓熊(no chinese word) (māo xióng) (which means) "cat bear" (in English).
A lot of dolphins live in the deep water. (,but) But the Chinese white dolphins live in shallows. Although (they were) named white dolphin, their color are black when they (were) born. (They become) It becomes gray when they are teenager. While they grow to manhood (When they grow up), (they become) it becomes pink.
The length is measured from one to three meters approximately. They have a strong body (bodies). There is a small fin on their back. They mainly live in coastal waters of tropic and temperate zone. The earliest record is discovered by explorer Peter Mundy.
However, the Chinese white dolphins are endangered. (,because) Because of the water pollution, their amounts are decreasing recently. They are now in the pact which is forbidden in international trade. There are also laws to protect them. I hope they will not disappear in the far future.
Bat Bats are neither birds nor insects. They are(actually) mammals that (which) can fly. During the day, they often hang themselves up side down in the trees or caves. People can see them only in darkness.
Due to the poor eyesight, bats use the ultrasonic wave to check if there is something dangerous while fly (flying) in darkness. By the way, the excrement of bats is a medicine in China.
Bats are (special than the other mammals because they have many difference)“special”mammals that have many differences between the others. They are also the only mammals that can fly. Although the appearances of bats are fearful, they (do not harm people at all)do good to people. By Jill/modified by Candy
basketball What is the most famouse sport in the world?What make(加s) us so crazy about Jeremy Lin?It's basketball (加and) It's also my favorite sport. Every morning,we wake up early to （see改成watch) the NBA game(加s)(,改成句號)In the university,I join the basketball team for my interest (加句號)（pratice拼字practice) it every Monday and Thursday(,改句號）it's NBA （加that）（make加s) us spend (lot's改成lots) of money to buy the peripheral (product加s). Now,basketball has (been改成become) the important and indespensable part of my life,so why not crazy for the basketball with people around the world? by Daniel
In the animal of snake, the most largest and special is boa constrictor. Furthermore it is the biggest snake in the world. Because(delete) its length (can be)is more than 11 meter and it has 137 kilogram and it lives in South America. Boa constrictor has sub aquatic and arboreal abilities.
There are horrible symbols(characteristic) of them. For example, a huge body with long drag, lots of scale smooth and glossy. In addition, weird marks are their eyes and noses that wear up on their head. But, there is an interesting thing that behind their eyes. Just like be painted by eye liner as beautiful Cleopatra. And their back of bodies are filled by olive-green or olive-drab piling some black stripe.
At the last, some people hate them as their dangerous, merciless and dark impression. Contrary, I love it for their beautiful, cold and proud features. If I have a chance go to Indonesia I will make my dream come true.
The jaguar is a big cat. (It is ) a feline in the Panthera genus and (it) is the only Panthera species found in the America. The jaguar is the third-largest feline after the tiger and the lion, and (it is) the largest in the Western Hemisphere. The jaguar's present range extends from Southern United States and Mexico across much of Central America and south to Paraguay and northern Argentina.
This cat(‘s) most closely resembles (is physically) the leopard, although it is usually larger and (have more) sturdier build and its behavioural and habitat characteristics are closer to those of the tiger. While dense rainforest is its preferred habitat, the jaguar will range across a variety of forested and open terrains.
Its numbers are declining. Threats include loss and fragmentation of habitat. While international trade in jaguars or their parts is prohibited, the cat is still frequently killed by human. We should try our best to protect them.
Formosan Black Bear Formosan Black Bear is a kind of distinctive animal in Taiwan. Just as its name, their body covered with a thick coat of black fur. But most interesting part, the fur around their neck is white. (According to this改so) they are also (known as改called) "white-throated bears". Formosan Black Bear are the largest (land animal改terrestrial animal) in Taiwan. They are 130-160cm in length, 60-70cm high at the shoulder, weigh (on average改至句尾) 95-120kg (on average). But (this改the) size is not big at all in bear kingdom.
On Account of people hunting(the bear), Formosan Black Bear are in danger of extinction. (To sum up,)How(how) to protect them from extinction(, it’s改is) a biggest problem waiting for solved.
Spider is a commom creature that it can be easily seen around us. Thought it looks like an insect, it's not. Insects isare defined as a creatures with six legs. But spider has eight. They are often categorized as an insect because they look like an insect.
Spider is a gifted hunter. It has many great weapons. It can make a web as a trap for games and make them as its food. Some of the spider have strong legs. So they can run fast to chase their games. After they get their games, they will inject poisonous fluid into the game's body to make it died and eat it.
Most of spiders have a terrible appearence. But they help people a lot of for they can kill vermins. Next time when you see it don't beget afraid for its apprearence. In terms of killing vermins, they do help people a lot.
Narwhal is also called Narwhale. It is found primarily in Canadian Arctic and Greenland waters. When it comes to the (characteristics) of them, they are unique predators in Arctic. The most obvious characteristic is the precious "single horn" which sticks out from its supramaxilla. Actually, the "single horn" is not a real "horn". The "horn" is a tooth which is about two hundred meters.
They have a restricted diet (relatively). Greeenland halibut, shrimp, wolffish and Gonatus squid consist of their prey. (Halibuts, shrimps, wolfish and squids in the Greenland are hunted by narwhals.) The color of their skin is fundamentally white, and there are many black dots that scatter on their back. About their habitual behavior, they use (tend) to swallow the prey but don't (never) use their "horn" to poke them.
Owing to their precious "horn", they have been slaughtered by some cruel dealers and aboriginals and their "horn" had (have) been sold to make a great deal of profits (profit). Nowadays, they had (have) been included in the group of endangered species. For (To) protecting (protect) them, we should prevent ourselves from buying and using the products which is made up of any part of them.
In today’s (industrialized country), more and more uncultured places are turned into magnificent buildings. Whenever I (imagine) the garden in front of my house, I can not but feel relaxed. The green garden corresponds to the easy life in I-lan. It not only relieves my pressure, but does (beneficial) for the Earth.
In winter, falling leaves express a sense of romance. In summer, the birds’ twitter, the growing flowers, and various kinds of insects make my house beautiful. Because of twitter, people do not have to rely on alarm clocks. As a result, it is more peaceful in country than in city. The fragrance also(attract) beautifies (surroundings). It is a natural perfume.
With the development of economy, it is important that green lands should be reserved. There is no doubt that green lands are good for human. Thus, the garden in front of my house is precious (to) me and the Earth.
Rabbits are found in several parts of the world. Rabbits are mammals animal. The male is called a buck and the female is called a doe. Rabbits (Rabbitt’s) habitat include meadows(meadow), forest and grassland. Rabbits usually live in groups (group).
Rabbits have a pair of long ears which can be more than 10cm long and it is probably for detecting its predator. They have large and powerful hind legs. The two front paws have five toes while the hind legs have four toes. The size of rabbit (rabbits) can range from 20cm to 50cm and the weight range is from 0.4kg to 2kg.
The average sleep time of rabbit can say to be 8.4 hours. The expected rabbit lifespan is about 9-12years.The world longest-lived was 18 years.
Coffee is the most popular drink in Taiwan. If(也可改When)you look around the city where you live, you can find many places where sell different (kinds) of coffee (in convenience stores可省略). Especially, they offer it (in) low (price). But Why do people need coffee in their daily life? People are usually taking great responsibility for family and doing heavy job for company everyday. They need caffeine to get more energy and stay awake while they are working in the office.
Also, drinking coffee is a good way to release pressure. For instance, the most of western companies allow employees to have time taking a break and drinking coffee in the coffee time(in the afternoon可省略)at 3:00pm. For young people, coffee is a meaning of fashion. They like to drink coffee with friends or getting on line in the coffee shop,like starbucks. All and all, coffee becomes one of the important drinks in Taiwan.
So,ladies and gentlemen,do you drink coffee everyday?
Polar Bear
ReplyDeleteThe polar bear is a bear native largely within the (Arctic). It's the world's largest land carnivore and also the largest bear.
Polar bears range throughout the circumpolar north in areas
where they can hunt seals at open limbs. They are white, long neck and small head. They are good at swimming. Seals are the polar bears primary prey, particularly the ringed seal and, sometimes, the bearded seal. When hunting is good, polar bears will typically eat only the fat and leave the rest of the bodies for scavengers including arctic foxes and younger bears. In the wild, polar bears live an average of 15 to 18 years.
Polar bears are a potentially threatened species rather than an endangered animals. The major threat to the polar bear is climate change. Other threats include pollution etc. When ice become melt because of global warming. Polar bears will have no place to live. But we still can see them in zoo!
by monica/ shawn
The Dog
ReplyDeleteWhat is the keenest sense of smell on land? You must think (it) is the dog. Indeed, it is. There are more than 400 breeds of (dogs) in the world, such as Dachshund, Labra doodle, Pembroke Welsh Corgis, Cavalier King Charles Spaniels and German Shepherd Dogs. In these breeds of (dogs) , ( I most interested in Dachshund.)
Dachshund come in short haired smooth, long haired smooth and wire haired. They also have a wide (variety colors) . The (most) common (colors) are ( red , black and tan.) Dachshunds are playful, faithful and affectionate.
Dachshund was used to breed to track, dig (for their) prey, bury it, and (bark) to alert the (hunter) where (they) and (their) prey are located. (Dachshund) is a (scented) hunter and when ( they pick up the scent , they are ) single minded. When (they go) to (the) ground, (they are) formidable (enemies).
By Aries/Jeff
Penguin
ReplyDelete(One of) the most popular animals in Antarctica are penguins. Actually, there are seventeen kinds of penguins in the world. They have thick fat so as to store energy. In addition, they can move fast in the sea just as birds are flying in the sky. They are good at swimming and it is a great talent for them to run away from the (attack of enemies).
These different kinds of penguins can live in the same area (peacefully) because they eat dissimilar seafood. Moreover, they have good eyesight and listening to find out their mates or kids even in a great plenty of penguins.
Recently, (certain kinds of them) are in danger of (extinction). For instance, some dogs, cats, foxes and stoats which brought by people may attack penguins (, and the direct reason for their extinction is pollution of the sea and the changing of weather and these are caused by humans.) To sum up, people cannot turn a blind eye to the serious (threat to them).
by Ruby/ modified by Vivian
Hippo
ReplyDeleteThe hippo is the mostly(most) herbivorous mammal in sub-Saharan Africa.They are above(weight about) two thousand kilograms,long three to four meters,(they) are the thid big animal on the land.Their skin has thick sebaceous level,the common goods(object) can't harm them.
The hippo's head is big,mouth is extravagant,and ear(a) is(are) small.They are the social animal,each crowd probably has foury ty(there are about fourty hippos in each croed.).Their life-span is about fourty to fifty.
Hippopotamuses are completely opposite what with the outlook.Their temperament is extremely fierce,and easily attack other animals.In the world,one of the most dangerous biological animal(Hippo is one of the most dangerous biological animal in the world.).It does not have the natural enemy nearly, often is killed including the alligator and the lion by it(it is iften killed by the allgators and lons).The only natural enemy is a(the) humanity. When the(去掉) hippopotamus opening(opened its) mouth, is(it) is(去掉) actually threatening(threatens) the enemy.
by Lulu/ modified by Amy
上面那一篇還是有錯所以我再po一次:P,這篇才是對的
ReplyDeleteHippo
The hippo is the mostly(most) herbivorous mammal in sub-Saharan Africa.They are above(weight about) two thousand kilograms,long three to four meters,(they) are the thid(thrid) big animal on the land.Their skin has thick sebaceous level,the common goods(object) can't harm them.
The hippo's head is big,mouth is extravagant,and ear(s) is(are) small.They are the social animal,each crowd probably has foury ty(there are about fourty hippos in each croed.).Their life-span is about fourty to fifty.
Hippopotamuses are completely opposite what with the outlook(appearance).Their temperament is extremely fierce,and easily attack other animals.In the world,one of the most dangerous biological animal(Hippo is one of the most dangerous biological animal in the world.).It does not have the natural enemy nearly, often is killed including the alligator and the lion by it(it is iften killed by the allgators and lons).The only natural enemy is a(the) humanity. When the(去掉) hippopotamus opening(opened its) mouth, is(it) is(去掉) actually threatening(threatens) the enemy.
by Lulu/ modified by Amy
Cell Phone
ReplyDeleteThe use of cell phone are becoming more common than ever, some people even have more than one cell phone. When I got my first cell phone, I was a junior high student; however, ( some children in elementary school are already have cell phones, and are very fashion ones. ) Today, we are going to talk about the most fashion kind: smart phone.
There are so many kinds of smart phone, and they all have lots of special applications of their own. Besides the functions like making calls, sending messages and taking pictures, smart phones enable you to surf the Internet, keep in touch with friends through some social websites, check your e-mail and can also edit your photos or music. One of the most interesting applications I have ever ( seen ) is an application that it can take down a girl's menstrual cycle, and will remind them before the next one come.
A smart phone combine so many interesting and useful functions in one phone ( making ) people become smarter, and that is the reason I think it deserve the name " smart ".
by Ruth / modified by Wendy
Snake’s doesn’t have clear hearing and sight. They can’t hear clearly and also can’t see very lightly. So they usually use its nose to smell the quarries and can note where the environment they are.
ReplyDeleteSnakes different from other animal are that they don’t have any foot, they can’t walk by their feet. Then snakes walk by their venter, and walk with “S” shape. This is snakes unique feature that no animals the same as them.
Snakes always made people scared, but actually they also are afraid of people. Take snakes can’t walk for example. Snakes just can crawl on the road, and their vision and auditory sense are not good at all, so we should not afraid of the snakes.
by Joy/modified by Jeff
Notebook
ReplyDeleteComputer is common in a family(for people). But in(In) fact, notebook is more convenient than a(the) computer. It is easy to carry and it( )is( ) smaller than the computer.
Notebook is just() like a small computer. There are(has) many functions, but most of them are the(just) same as the computer. However, it also has many shortcomings. For example, notebook is easy to get troubles(damages) and it can’t stay for(without power) more than five hours in average.
Students always choose computer not the notebook.(delete the stence) To sum up, both of them have good points or bad points. Just depends on everyone’s need.
BY ANNE modified by VERA
Drinking Coffee
ReplyDeleteCoffee is the most popular drink in Taiwan. If you look around the city where you live, you can find many places where sell different (kinds) of coffee in convenience stores. Especially, they offer it (in) low (price). But Why do people need coffee in their daily life? People are usually taking great responsibility for family and doing heavy job for company everyday. They need caffeine to get more energy and stay awake while they are working in the office.
Also, drinking coffee is a good way to release pressure. For instance, the most of western companies allow employees to have time taking a break and drinking coffee in the coffee time in the afternoon at 3:00pm. For young people, coffee is a meaning of fashion. They like to drink coffee with friends or getting on line in the coffee shop,like starbucks. All and all, coffee becomes one of the important drinks in Taiwan.
So,ladies and gentlemen,do you drink coffee everyday?
BY Joyce:)/modified by Christine
Cats
ReplyDeleteWhat do you think about cats? You probably think of them as sneaks and even little devils (because there are many black sayings about cats in old-fashioned tales.) They have triangle-liked ears, a pair of special eyes that would (change) with the light in the day and night (and) a long tail.
We often have a wrong impression on something because (we do not know it enough), like our images of cats. Actually, cats have some very cute characteristics. Cats are very quiet and tender (animals). Instead of making a lot of noises, they will just silently (be your company). Sometimes, they will need some of your attention, and they will act like a child.
If you spend (much) time with cats, you will find out that they are not evil, but in fact, quite (cute). You will find many surprises when you get along with them. And, maybe, they will be one of your best friends.
by Candace / modified by Jessica
Thank you Jessica~ ^^
DeleteEmbarrassing Experience
ReplyDeleteEveryone has an embarrassing experience. It is difficult to react when people (encounter) an embarrassing situation. For example, fall down the stairs in public (and) bump against a clean glass window or (door.) There are many embarrassing events happen day to day.
As I see it, the most embarrassing experience I have ever had is to (fart) in the tiny space, which often happens in (a) elevator. This physical phenomenon is difficult to control. The (situation is often called) "elephant in the room". Everyone knows that what is going on, but no one will (say anything in) such an awkward occasion.
(Next time, when) you (encounter) embarrassing things, maybe you should cover your face with mask to avoid people recognizing you!
by Vanessa/modified by Jill
Snoopy
ReplyDeleteWith big, little long, black ears on head, he has become the most famous beagle (in our life.) Snoopy has become a world-wild known name in the recent fifty years. Snoopy is a (major character) which was created by American cartoonist, Charles M. Schulz, in a series (comic), Peanuts.
Snoopy loves to play tricks on his master, Charlie Brown. He (enjoys) immersing in his own fantasy. He always images himself in every role such as a World War II soldier, a pilot or a navy. Although sometimes he seems a little unreasonable, he has a lovely aspect. He likes to play with rabbits and his (best) friend, a small, homeless hummingbird.
Snoopy not only makes people laugh but also gives us deep inspirations. Indeed, he has been an important part (in the memories of many people's childhood). And this cunning, impish dog (will last long forever.)
By Vanessa
Cat
ReplyDeleteCats are one of the smartest (刪去of all) animals. They have been survived for thousand(刪去s) (刪去for) years. All the cat family are born to be (hunted). They are good enough to think how to catch their great feast. It is no wonder that(why) people think cats are smart.
Cars are very individual. They can take care of themselves without human beings feeding them. Besides, they have a lot of pride. Sometimes, people thought cats are too proud to obedient.
Cats have so many features that always charm people. It is a great choice to choose cats as pet.
By Daniel /Angel
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ReplyDeleteMt. Jade
ReplyDelete(First,)Mt. Jade is the highest mountain in East Asia.Mt.Jade(刪去Mt.Jade改Otherwise,it) is at an elevation of about 3,952 meters. Many climbers are regarded Mt. Jade(刪去Mt.Jade改it) as a goal.
(Second,)Mt. Jade is characterized by its biological diversity. Mt. Jade(刪去Mt.Jade改its) country park is located on it.
(加At the last,)Mt. Jade not only is a holy mountain of Bu Nun Tribe and Zou Tribe but also symbolizes (in) Taiwan.
By Ruby / modified by Sonia
Notebook
ReplyDeleteby Marcel
There are so many books in the whole world. The diversity of books is really amazing. You can learn (from) it, be entertained by it and you can even write on it. Now (let us) know ( )notebook(s) better.
If you take a few minutes (in) a bookstore, you will be surprised how (various) the notebooks are. From the (book)size, content to the cover, you can always find the right one that you really need. For example, if you are a writer, and you need to right down your sudden inspiration, you can use the pocketbook. Or if you are an artist, you can use a plain one.
All in all, notebook(s) ( ) always provide you a place where you can “talk”. A notebook will be a good company and (bear) everything for you (or "you can bear everything with it"). You can take it as a tutor. And most important, you can take it as a friend.
revised by Felix
1. The African Meercat
ReplyDeleteThe word meercat comes from Dutch, and it means "lake cat". However, meercats aren't cats, and most of meercats do not live near the river. A full grew meercat is usually around 30 centimeters long, and weighs around 725 grams. They run around with their legs, and their tails point up at the sky. When they stand still, they look like humans who look over tall grass.
Although meercats are small, they have strong claws to help them dig out their underground homes. They also use their claws to find tasty insects in the dirt. No matter what they are doing, one or two meercats always go to higher place where they can prevent danger. The brave animals even give their own lives to protect each other.
Meercats show that even the smallest and weakest of creatures can survive in the African grassland.
By Sherry/modified by Kayla
Taylor Swift
ReplyDeleteShe is born in American pennsylvania.She has long curly blond hair,(and) blue eyes.Her height is 180 cm.Her birthday is on December, 13.She is twenty-two years old this year.
Taylor Swift is good at singing,(and) playing guitar.She can write many songs and compose a poem.She began to write song(s) when she was 12.Because of her unusual, she was bullied by other chilidren.(But she didn't give in, this frustration made her(devote) to create. Now her (songs are) popular around the world.For example, Love Story is one of her most popular song.She has a speical habit before performance. She will write "thirteen" on her arm, because this number means lucky to her.
Taylor Swift won many prizes in her present life.She had a tour performance last year, she toured many countries, and successfully became a (well-known) person.Today, she is not only a country singer,but also a superstar in the world.
By Lulu
The Giant Panda
ReplyDeleteThe Giant Panda is a bear native to 〈the〉 South Western 〈of〉 China. It is easily recognized by its large 〈and〉 distinctive black patches around the eyes〈,〉 the ears 〈,〉 and 〈the〉 body. The Giant Panda's main food is bamboo. Therefore, they need to live in a place where 〈there is full of〉bamboo.
In the wild, the Giant Panda is a terrestrial animal and spends its life roaming and 〈living〉in the bamboo forests. The Giant Panda eats as much as 14 〈kilograms〉of bamboo shoots〈 in an average day〉. Because the Giant Panda consumes a diet in 〈low〉nutrition, it is important for it to keep its digestive tract full. The Giant Panda is able to climb and 〈live〉in hollow trees or rock crevices〈,〉but〈 they〉 do not 〈take them as〉permanent dens.
〈The〉 Giant Panda is very important 〈for〉us and our country. 〈What makes matter worse is that〉many people hunt them for different 〈purposes〉, such as selling them for money. It becomes 〈one of the〉 endangered species. I wish everyone 〈could〉 protest them and conserve their〈habitats〉.
Written by Jenny/modified by Teresa
Pig
ReplyDeleteWhat is the fattest animal in the world? (That'a right!) The answer is a pig. To tell the truth, pigs do love to be clean. However, (most) people want to decrease the cost, they let those pigs live in a lot of mud and do not want to use water to wash them. Therefore, it is a stereotype that pigs like to be dirty.
Pigs have special noses, it is a feature of them. Also, it is a specific symbol of them. Their both nose holes are so big, they make pigs look so ridiculous. They have four huge and short legs. We may think that they can not run so fast; nevertheless, they run very quickly. On the other hand, they have a cute and curly tale.
Pigs are not only an animal but also a kind of food. A lot of people like to eat pork, which is a dish of cooked pig. Most of all, they can be our pets or our food.
Next time, while you looking at a crowd of pigs , don't feel them disgusting or dirty. They are the fattest even the smart creature in the world.
By Kayla/modified by Sherry
Flea
ReplyDelete(When) talking about small animals, what will catch your (eyes)? Ants, mice, worm, etc. The answer is flea. Flea is the smallest visible animal in this world.
They used to live in other creatures(') hair and staying alive by sucking the blood out of their host. Another special feature about this little fellow (去逗號) is that it can jump almost one hundreds time higher then it`s original size! Is (that not) incredible!
Fleas can be found on almost every wild animals with fur,[去括號] and (it) is almost impossible to extinct.These small vampires is (sure to be) a miracle of the nature.
BY Peter / Modified by Charlie
Cat
ReplyDeleteCats are one of the smartest of all animals. They have been survived (for thousand years). All the cat family are born to be hunters. They are (good to) think how to (prepare) their great feast. It is no wonder that people think cats are smart.
Cars are very individual. They can take care of themselves without human beings feeding them. Besides, they (are) pride. Sometimes, people thought cats are too proud to obedient.
Cats have so many features that always charm people. It is a great choice to choose cats as pet.
By Angel
The Fainting Goat
ReplyDeleteWith a(the) worldwide population of(去of) over 450 million, goats are the earliest-known domesticated animals. However there is one breed like no other(another)－the Tennessee Fainting Goat(s). (They are)Also known as Stiff-leg, Wooden-leg, Nervous or Scare Goats. Fainting goats are quite special because they look as if they have(were) really fainted after being startled.
Fainting goats have an inherited condition called congenital myotonia, which causes their muscles to lock up. When they are excited or scared, some (will) freeze up and collapse on the other side, while others brace(bracing) themselves on rigid legs. And their large, prominent eyes are another noticeable characteristic.
The name is actually a misnomer because the goats never lose consciousness when they fall over. The condition lasts for 10 to 15 seconds, after which(that) the goats will get up and run in a stiff-legged fashion.
by Sandy
Menghuan Pond
ReplyDeleteMenghuan Pond is located in Yangmingshan National Park at about 850 meter height.()Because of its height,()this pond (was)is covered by (the) fog almost (every year)throughout the whole year(,).(p)People call(ed) it Menghuan Lake,which means(ed) fantastic and hazy.
( )It also has another name,()Duck Pond,()because there are many ducks (swam)swimming (on)in this pond.()In this pond,()(lived)lives very previous plants, ()such as Isoetes (Taiwanese)Taiwanesis.()It is (a) one kind of the disappearing plants(,).()(so) (w)We have to protect (this)these plants to avoid them becoming (extact)extinct.
( )In (R)recent years,()the (weather were)global climate is getting worse.()If we keep (hurting)spoiling the earth,()maybe this good place and special plants will be gone in the near future.()As a result,()we have to treasure this earth.()(Maybe)Hope that our children and grandchildren can also admire this earth in the future(.),too.
originally by Bonnie, modified by Candace
Giant panda
ReplyDeleteWhat (kind of) animal is the most popular in China?The answer is giant panda.The giant panda has a black-and-white coat and a body shape (which is) typical of bears.It has black fur on its ears, eye patches, muzzle, legs, arms and shoulders.
The average (of) giant panda eats as much as 9 to 14 kg (20 to 30 pounds) of bamboo shoots a day.They live in forest and the cool place.
In Taiwan, the popular name for panda is the inverted 貓熊(no chinese word) (māo xióng) (which means) "cat bear" (in English).
By Stephanie Ho/Modified by Shu Han
The Chinese White Dolphin
ReplyDeleteA lot of dolphins live in the deep water. (,but) But the Chinese white dolphins live in shallows. Although (they were) named white dolphin, their color are black when they (were) born. (They become) It becomes gray when they are teenager. While they grow to manhood (When they grow up), (they become) it becomes pink.
The length is measured from one to three meters approximately. They have a strong body (bodies). There is a small fin on their back. They mainly live in coastal waters of tropic and temperate zone. The earliest record is discovered by explorer Peter Mundy.
However, the Chinese white dolphins are endangered. (,because) Because of the water pollution, their amounts are decreasing recently. They are now in the pact which is forbidden in international trade. There are also laws to protect them. I hope they will not disappear in the far future.
by Jessica/ modified by Angel
Bat
ReplyDeleteBats are neither birds nor insects. They are(actually) mammals that (which) can fly. During the day, they often hang themselves up side down in the trees or caves. People can see them only in darkness.
Due to the poor eyesight, bats use the ultrasonic wave to check if there is something dangerous while fly (flying) in darkness. By the way, the excrement of bats is a medicine in China.
Bats are (special than the other mammals because they have many difference)“special”mammals that have many differences between the others. They are also the only mammals that can fly. Although the appearances of bats are fearful, they (do not harm people at all)do good to people.
By Jill/modified by Candy
basketball
ReplyDeleteWhat is the most famouse sport in the world?What make(加s) us so crazy about Jeremy Lin?It's basketball (加and) It's also my favorite sport.
Every morning,we wake up early to （see改成watch) the NBA game(加s)(,改成句號)In the university,I join the basketball team for my interest (加句號)（pratice拼字practice) it every Monday and Thursday(,改句號）it's NBA （加that）（make加s) us spend (lot's改成lots) of money to buy the peripheral (product加s).
Now,basketball has (been改成become) the important and indespensable part of my life,so why not crazy for the basketball with people around the world?
by Daniel
Boa Constrictor
ReplyDeleteIn the animal of snake, the most largest and special is boa constrictor. Furthermore it is the biggest snake in the world. Because(delete) its length (can be)is more than 11 meter and it has 137 kilogram and it lives in South America. Boa constrictor has sub aquatic and arboreal abilities.
There are horrible symbols(characteristic) of them. For example, a huge body with long drag, lots of scale smooth and glossy. In addition, weird marks are their eyes and noses that wear up on their head. But, there is an interesting thing that behind their eyes. Just like be painted by eye liner as beautiful Cleopatra. And their back of bodies are filled by olive-green or olive-drab piling some black stripe.
At the last, some people hate them as their dangerous, merciless and dark impression. Contrary, I love it for their beautiful, cold and proud features. If I have a chance go to Indonesia I will make my dream come true.
by Sonia,modified by Ruby
The jaguar is a big cat. (It is ) a feline in the Panthera genus and (it) is the only Panthera species found in the America. The jaguar is the third-largest feline after the tiger and the lion, and (it is) the largest in the Western Hemisphere. The jaguar's present range extends from Southern United States and Mexico across much of Central America and south to Paraguay and northern Argentina.
ReplyDeleteThis cat(‘s) most closely resembles (is physically) the leopard, although it is usually larger and (have more) sturdier build and its behavioural and habitat characteristics are closer to those of the tiger. While dense rainforest is its preferred habitat, the jaguar will range across a variety of forested and open terrains.
Its numbers are declining. Threats include loss and fragmentation of habitat. While international trade in jaguars or their parts is prohibited, the cat is still frequently killed by human. We should try our best to protect them.
By Cheryl, modified by Bryan
Formosan Black Bear
ReplyDeleteFormosan Black Bear is a kind of distinctive animal in Taiwan. Just as its name, their body covered with a thick coat of black fur. But most interesting part, the fur around their neck is white. (According to this改so) they are also (known as改called) "white-throated bears".
Formosan Black Bear are the largest (land animal改terrestrial animal) in Taiwan. They are 130-160cm in length, 60-70cm high at the shoulder, weigh (on average改至句尾) 95-120kg (on average). But (this改the) size is not big at all in bear kingdom.
On Account of people hunting(the bear), Formosan Black Bear are in danger of extinction. (To sum up,)How(how) to protect them from extinction(, it’s改is) a biggest problem waiting for solved.
By Vera / Ann
Spider
ReplyDeleteSpider is a commom creature that it can be easily seen around us. Thought it looks like an insect, it's not. Insects isare defined as a creatures with six legs. But spider has eight. They are often categorized as an insect because they look like an insect.
Spider is a gifted hunter. It has many great weapons. It can make a web as a trap for games and make them as its food. Some of the spider have strong legs. So they can run fast to chase their games. After they get their games, they will inject poisonous fluid into the game's body to make it died and eat it.
Most of spiders have a terrible appearence. But they help people a lot of for they can kill vermins. Next time when you see it don't beget afraid for its apprearence. In terms of killing vermins, they do help people a lot.
By Bryan/modified by Cheryl
Narwhal
ReplyDeleteNarwhal is also called Narwhale. It is found primarily in Canadian Arctic and Greenland waters. When it comes to the (characteristics) of them, they are unique predators in Arctic. The most obvious characteristic is the precious "single horn" which sticks out from its supramaxilla. Actually, the "single horn" is not a real "horn". The "horn" is a tooth which is about two hundred meters.
They have a restricted diet (relatively). Greeenland halibut, shrimp, wolffish and Gonatus squid consist of their prey. (Halibuts, shrimps, wolfish and squids in the Greenland are hunted by narwhals.) The color of their skin is fundamentally white, and there are many black dots that scatter on their back. About their habitual behavior, they use (tend) to swallow the prey but don't (never) use their "horn" to poke them.
Owing to their precious "horn", they have been slaughtered by some cruel dealers and aboriginals and their "horn" had (have) been sold to make a great deal of profits (profit). Nowadays, they had (have) been included in the group of endangered species. For (To) protecting (protect) them, we should prevent ourselves from buying and using the products which is made up of any part of them.
by Vivian/modified by Ruby
The Garden
ReplyDeleteIn today’s (industrialized country), more and more uncultured places are turned into magnificent buildings. Whenever I (imagine) the garden in front of my house, I can not but feel relaxed. The green garden corresponds to the easy life in I-lan. It not only relieves my pressure, but does (beneficial) for the Earth.
In winter, falling leaves express a sense of romance. In summer, the birds’ twitter, the growing flowers, and various kinds of insects make my house beautiful. Because of twitter, people do not have to rely on alarm clocks. As a result, it is more peaceful in country than in city. The fragrance also(attract) beautifies (surroundings). It is a natural perfume.
With the development of economy, it is important that green lands should be reserved. There is no doubt that green lands are good for human. Thus, the garden in front of my house is precious (to) me and the Earth.
by Teresa/modified by Jenny
Rabbits are found in several parts of the world. Rabbits are mammals animal. The male is called a buck and the female is called a doe. Rabbits (Rabbitt’s) habitat include meadows(meadow), forest and grassland. Rabbits usually live in groups (group).
ReplyDeleteRabbits have a pair of long ears which can be more than 10cm long and it is probably for detecting its predator. They have large and powerful hind legs. The two front paws have five toes while the hind legs have four toes. The size of rabbit (rabbits) can range from 20cm to 50cm and the weight range is from 0.4kg to 2kg.
The average sleep time of rabbit can say to be 8.4 hours. The expected rabbit lifespan is about 9-12years.The world longest-lived was 18 years.
by Shu Han/modified by Stephanie
Drinking Coffee
ReplyDeleteCoffee is the most popular drink in Taiwan. If(也可改When)you look around the city where you live, you can find many places where sell different (kinds) of coffee (in convenience stores可省略). Especially, they offer it (in) low (price). But Why do people need coffee in their daily life? People are usually taking great responsibility for family and doing heavy job for company everyday. They need caffeine to get more energy and stay awake while they are working in the office.
Also, drinking coffee is a good way to release pressure. For instance, the most of western companies allow employees to have time taking a break and drinking coffee in the coffee time(in the afternoon可省略)at 3:00pm. For young people, coffee is a meaning of fashion. They like to drink coffee with friends or getting on line in the coffee shop,like starbucks. All and all, coffee becomes one of the important drinks in Taiwan.
So,ladies and gentlemen,do you drink coffee everyday?
BY Joyce:)/modified by Bonnie Lin